Ellipsis: Episode 35   Leave a comment

Hello all,

Thank you for reading today’s episode of Meanwhile in Space… I really wanted this episode to feel creepy. We’ve all felt like someone was watching us and I really wanted to capture that feeling. Timmy has mostly been the indicator, the early detection system of the group. That stomach of his has yet to be wrong.

I liked the elevator scene the best. I don’t like elevators that much, but they are a necessary evil. I don’t imagine the people of Space Station Helios to be using the stairs. But think of all the exercise they’d get! I debated whether I should up the stakes and have something happen to them in the elevator. I didn’t want to have the obligatory “stuck in the elevator” scene, but not much happens in this episode, so it might have been SOMETHING. You tell me.

That’s all I have for this week. Maybe next week I’ll delve into what inspired this storyline!

Thanks for reading,



Posted May 16, 2011 by Xanto P. Jones in Flash Fiction

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